Hullo, first let me say, great job. Have you ever done any acting? I really like how you did not actually say what you did. You hint at it, but you dont make it obvious. I thought that worked really well. If people dont unerstand it then they werent paying attention. I also liked how you incorporated some sound effects with your talking, it helped with the movement of the whole piece. It was a bit repetetive in some parts, which im guessing was just to make it longer. I think if you disregard the time restriction(like basically everyone else) and cut out a couple of the repetitive phrases, it'll be perfect. nice job.
Hullo, first let me say, great job. Have you ever done any acting? I really like how you did not actually say what you did. You hint at it, but you dont make it obvious. I thought that worked really well. If people dont unerstand it then they werent paying attention. I also liked how you incorporated some sound effects with your talking, it helped with the movement of the whole piece. It was a bit repetetive in some parts, which im guessing was just to make it longer. I think if you disregard the time restriction(like basically everyone else) and cut out a couple of the repetitive phrases, it'll be perfect. nice job.
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Hullo,
first let me say, great job. Have you ever done any acting?
I really like how you did not actually say what you did. You hint at it, but you dont make it obvious. I thought that worked really well. If people dont unerstand it then they werent paying attention. I also liked how you incorporated some sound effects with your talking, it helped with the movement of the whole piece. It was a bit repetetive in some parts, which im guessing was just to make it longer. I think if you disregard the time restriction(like basically everyone else) and cut out a couple of the repetitive phrases, it'll be perfect.
nice job.
~Alec
Hullo,
first let me say, great job. Have you ever done any acting?
I really like how you did not actually say what you did. You hint at it, but you dont make it obvious. I thought that worked really well. If people dont unerstand it then they werent paying attention. I also liked how you incorporated some sound effects with your talking, it helped with the movement of the whole piece. It was a bit repetetive in some parts, which im guessing was just to make it longer. I think if you disregard the time restriction(like basically everyone else) and cut out a couple of the repetitive phrases, it'll be perfect.
nice job.
~Alec
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